Edit: Have a confession. I started to do this comic while a freshman in highschool, but I got discouraged very easily and gave up when I got so many criticisms. If you ask and I put effort into it, I might put the rest of the words to it, but it might be difficult. Just know that Vic was jealous easily of Judith.
Yep...this is what I did when I was a freshman in high school. Sort of makes me smile, realizing that I've at least gotten way better and that I changed how the characters looked slightly. You guys can tell what was messed up in here, can't ya? You can point them out and I wouldn't be offended. I see them.
So here is an example of how I used to draw. That is Vic and her sister Judith. So many flaws. *tsk* Seriously, showing off newer comics when and if I can. Not sure if I can trust you guys yet to be honest. Don't get offended.
Not too bad, actually! You did these in Freshman year? Pretty good grasp of facial expressions. Also, continuity with the characters was good. Sometimes people can draw something once, but can't replicate it the same way for the next panel ^^